Monday 2 August 2010

Last Breaths

she knelt down,
pushing her to the ground,
face down into the dirt,
she pressed hard,
making sure her air supply was cut off
she pushed again, one last time,
till she was certain all sign of life had disappeared,
she stood back up,
tossed her in the bin,
and lit another cigarette

11 comments:

Ebanehita said...

is she killing "The Other Woman". haha nice poem

RAJEEV said...

beautiful as much as u
something is now and rest is due
i think 2 use words very few
but it becomes as large as my
....view

Page Turner said...

Great poem!

Lennon said...

For some reason I like this poem.
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mir said...

all ciggies deserve death for what they do to humans :)

Storm Of Angels said...

great poem.

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Christine said...

I really like this, can't wait to read more!

Flagpole Death said...

that was LEGIT

The Car Buying King said...

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